Thursday 20 March 2014

Dialogue script - third draft

JORDAN SMITH
The years haven't been pretty to Albert.

 AIDEN TOOLE
 Look…you’re not supposed to know about him.


JORDAN
Your uncle lived a lie. Never happy enough with what he's got. 

AIDEN
He's got pound signs for eyes, he was ravelled in mystery ever since I was born. Mum and dad refused to tell me that my un-philanthropic uncle robbed from the wealth of others.

JORDAN
Guess that seems fair though, you'd be too young to understand. Friends of my brothers, well people he knows. They know of Albert, better get his back covered. That's all I'm saying.

AIDEN
Sorry?

JORDAN
The Corones, a highly invested family. They have an expansively wealthy empire. Albert's a crook after all, and what do crooks do? They take from the big'uns, I heard that's exactly what he did to them. Lets just say they ain't the forgiving type.

AIDEN

Just stay out of their business, you’re no one to get involved. Talking stuff like that is never good. Families family, so they'll have me to answer to if so.

JORDAN

Alright, alright. But I just thought ya better know. In case, you know? It’d be heart breaking for your family if you lost him.


AIDEN
My uncle isn't exactly the family man. It's not like we meet up every week, I rarely see him. Now shut up about this. You're meant to keep quiet. If this gets out I know where to come.

JORDAN
Fine, cya later…mate. 

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