Showing posts with label Writing for Film and TV. Show all posts
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Friday, 30 May 2014

The Commissioning Process

Writers/Agents

An agent or a talent agent as they are usually referred, is a person who looks for jobs for actors, filmmakers, scriptwriters, musicians, models and writers. Amongst many other people involved in the creative line of work, including broadcasting industries. They are useful because they defend their clients as well as promoting and supporting them in whatever they need their agent for. Typically an agent will take 10-20% of their clients earnings. You do not need an agent, however it can be quite imperative in helping to find work because often casting directors approach talent agencies. It is very hard in the creative industry to find work, because it takes both talent and luck. Getting your name is very hard and agents can help solve this.

Talent agents can help to negotiate contracts and strike deals with writers looking to sell their work or win them a writing job for a production. Talent agents can be very useful to work with, because they often work with many talented individuals. Therefore employers are more likely to approach agencies because they know they will have someone who fits the criteria well. A lot of major film studios will often not hire people if they aren't part of a talent agency, however many other film studios (especially independent ones) won't hire people from agencies. This is because it can also be off putting as it can cause hassle and can make the client look more unapproachable if they do all their business work via an agent.

For an up and coming screenplay writer who is looking to sell his script to production companies, or similarly a writer looking to become employed on a production to write a script a talent agent would often be a good route into finding work. This is because an agent can advertise their work to different companies, as well as finding them internships for different productions, to work behind the scenes as a script advisor. A script advisor usually works with the script/screenplay team, helping to advise in making better decisions as well as coming up with different concepts to further develop a script. Becoming a script advisor is a good stepping stone to trying to find work as a writer, because it can help to promote your own personal work, as well as proving to professionals the standard of your abilities. So therefore for a writer, having an agent can be useful because they can help to find you advisory jobs, or even better finding companies which will buy your scripts. Of course when a production company buys your screenplay/script, there is then the issue that they can then change absolutely anything they want as the rights are now theirs. Often companies will completely change the idea, just keep some of the ground work the same.


Commissioning Editors/E-Commissioning

E-commissioning is a form of receiving exclusive material from television and online companies and producers. It is in the form of registration, where producers, writers, filmmakers can submit their proposals of television shows online. No ordinary member of the public can sign up to e-commissioning. You must be part of a production company or have verified credentials in the industry. A proposal is an outlined idea for a production, this could range from anything to a film all the way to an advert. The proposal is the pitch which you try to sell forward to other companies, once a proposal is sent through to the e-commissioning service, a unique reference number is issued. Around about 10'000 proposals are sent through to the BBCs e-commissioning service every year. So to ensure that as a writer you have the best possible chance of getting a meeting with the commissioners, it is highly important that your proposals are top notch, engaging and filled with correct grammar.

While doing my research on e-commissioning I found a BBC Commissioning Editors contact page, her name is Clare Paterson and she works for the BBC in Wales, specifically for documentaries and all knowledge programmes from independent filmmakers in Wales.

The role of a commissioning editor is that they go out and find work in which they can publish, for example they will find new screenplays and filmmakers who they can then approach to get their work known or made. For example a commissioning editor might discover a screenplay idea for a new television show, if they like the idea of it they will have talks with the head of commissioning so that they can commission a production to be put in place. The reason an e-commissioning service is made available via the BBC is because the BBC is a public service broadcaster, meaning we the public pay a license fee so that the BBC can exist. So to thank the public, the BBC need to come across as friendly and working with the public, so that the people that pay for the BBC carry on supporting them. It also paves way for exciting new talent which is being discovered. Commissioning editors are the key link between the proposal, right up until the finished product.

Below is the link I found to Clare Paterson's profile

http://www.bbc.co.uk/commissioning/whos-who/tv/knowledge/documentaries-1/clare-paterson.shtml

Getting stuff greenlit for Warner Brothers

In terms of getting your programme/film commissioned for a company or television channel, say BBC or Channel 4. You may be unsuccessful, other independent production companies may be interested. However this isn't the only option, as many filmmakers like to go big and try their hardest to get their show commissioned by the bigger companies who are at the top of the chain. For example Warner Brothers could be an option, if they weren't so bothered about your television show, a film may be ideal. The term greenlit, means when a programme or film has been given a commission, meaning it has the go ahead to be made with a fully functioning budget and team behind it. There are different ways of doing this, the most common way is to get your proposal seen or spoken to by a Director of Creative Development or by a Production Executive/Producer. The current president of Warner Brothers is Paul Broucek, he makes the sort of decisions which can make or break a filmmaker, because he has the overall decisions in what gets greenlit for production in the upcoming year. In conclusion he has more of a say than even the producer, when coming in terms with considering a screenplay to become a fully functioning film.
Independent Production companies

Being a producer carries a lot of risks in terms of copyright infringement and so forth, as soon as a filmmakers film is released many copyright inflicted risks are carried. So to ensure this is avoided, it is their responsibility to take out an errors and omissions insurance. This must be done prior to the release date, this is so that they have the chance  to cover themselves in case copyright claims are made against them. Possible claims which could be made against them, resulting in expensive court action (hence taking out insurance to help cover this) could range from;
  • Using a persons name without their consent in the film who is mutual with one of the main producers or part of the crew
  • Saying a brand name in the wrong context during the screenplay
  • Inadvertently breaking copyright infringement laws
  • Misusing a brand name or logo, for example if a serial killer wore a Nike hoody this would anger Nike as it would paint a potential concern on their company. 
All these risks as discussed above are worthy of the production being un-releasable and potentially career damaging, this is because if a copyright law is broken by one of the means above this can lose a production company a lot of money. And often it reflects badly on the director/producer because it is assumed they should have cleared all possible copyright issues. So that is why it is very important a company take out errors and omissions insurance, so that if a previously unrecognised law is broken in the production, they will have the necessary insurance which won't damage their career or a hefty court action bill.

While doing my research on independent production companies and errors and omissions insurance, I found an example of writers selling their ideas to producers. Tracking how their input into the production was. The first example is of the author Kaui Hart Hemmings, she is the author of the book The Descendants. Her agent sent a load of copies of her manuscript to many different filmmakers in London, they could apply for the option to buy the rights to make her book into a movie, something she had wanted for a while. The filmmaker who buys the rights can usually have the option for two years. After that they can hold, renew, let go entirely or buy. Right up closely until her book hit stores, screenwriter and producer Alexander Payne 'optioned' it. She then met with Payne to discuss the movie, as well as meeting the set designer and talking about the ideas they had. By the time Payne had optioned her book, she was living in Hawaii. So he flew out there to discuss the movie, while she walked him around locations where she thought of while writing the book. Payne met all of Hemmings family, her family also all had cameo roles in the film. Hemmings was on the set the whole time, she also got to be in the film. Most of the dialogue in the movie was also nearly directly extracted from the book. The writer also got to make the decisions on most of the sequences, the music, the clothes the characters wore and the places they visited.

Thursday, 3 April 2014

Endings in film

MacGuffin

A MacGuffin is something which drives the film and moves around the character, however it isn't important or what the audience usually care about. It is an element which drives the narrative. For example in Harry Potter and The Philosopher Stone, the MacGuffin is The Philosopher Stone.

A characters want and need 

In the film Lord of the Rings - The Return of the King, the main character Frodo wants to destroy the Ring by throwing it into Mordor, however his obsession with it is destroying him. The main character of Frodo needs to be strong within himself like Sam, so that he can beat his obsession with the Ring. Something which Sam could do.

The want which my character I created - Albert would be that he wants lots of money. Every con he does is a contest to him, and he must win that contest or he won't be happy. My character of Albert needs to let the money go and find inner peace with himself while staying happy with having a good relationship with his wife.

Michael Feit Dougan's Creative Compass

Below are four different possible endings to what could have happened in The Return of the King

Triumphant ending 

The Return of the King is already triumphant ending.

Transcendent ending

Frodo would be happy within himself and felt like he has beaten his obsession with the Ring, however he leaves Sam to continue the quest to destroy the Ring at Mordor.

Tragic ending 

Frodo does not destroy the Ring and it falls into the hands of Sauron. He also does not achieve strength within himself, ultimately ending in demise because of the Ring

Existential ending

The existential ending would be that Frodo successfully destroys the ring by throwing it into Mordor, however he is not strong or happy within himself like Sam and his obsession only worsens at the loss of the Ring.

Below are four different possible endings to what could have happened in the narrative for my film idea

Triumphant ending 

Albert successfully finds peace among himself, staying with his wife. Along with the millions of pounds which he has earn through cons.

Transcendent ending 

My film is already a transcendent ending - because he does not go away with much money, however he does finally become happy within himself as he has to learn to deal with what he did to his late wife.

Tragic ending

The tragic ending to my film would be that Albert walks away with no money and he is not happy with himself. Eventually dying as did his wife.

Existential ending 

Albert walks away from his murdered wife with millions of pounds from his successful cons, however he is upset and unhappy within himself because his cons have caused a misery to his life.

Thursday, 27 March 2014

Different types of genres

Out of the bottle

A "wish" asked for by the hero or granted by another, and the need to be delivered from the ordinary. A "spell" which has rules. A lesson to be learned.

Golden Fleece

Every Golden Fleece has a "road" - spanning oceans, time or distance. It signifies growth of the characters. Every Golden Fleece has a team (or a buddy) who represents the things the hero doesn't have. Every golden Fleece has a 'prize' at the end.

Fool Triumphant

A 'fool' whose innocence is their strength and whose gentle manner means they are likely to be ignored. An 'establishment' the fool comes up against, into which they don't fit. A 'transmutation' in which the fool becomes something new.

Monster in the House

A "monster" with evil at its core. An enclosed space ("house") which could include a family unit or a town. A "sin". Someone is guilty of something, which invites the monster.

Golden Fleece Film Idea

Title - The Fall of Man

Cast - Bryan Cranston, Matthew Fox, Andrew Lincoln, Liv Tyler and Sarah Michelle Geller.

Genre - Post apocalyptic/thriller

Logline - As the planet is on the verge of destruction, three scientists with a cure must not only survive the apocalypse but mankind itself as they learn that their mistakes in causing the disaster have repercussions.

Monster in the House film idea

Title - Broken Line

Cast - Jessica Lange and Emilie de Ravin

Genre - Horror/drama

Logline - A deranged woman who gave her son up for adoption 10 years ago wants to be reunited again. So when she's told she can't see her son, things turn ugly. As her dark secret unravels, rejection isn't something she takes likely.


Thursday, 20 March 2014

All Is Lost dialogue script - Re-write

EXT. Hanger - Night

Albert has been captured and tied up in an abandoned hangar. He has been blindfolded so he can't see anything. There are four men who are the Corone brothers, they are in their late 20s to early 30s. Rodger however is 42. They are tall and they all have dark brown hair. One is wearing a suit and the others are wearing leather jackets. They want revenge on what Albert did to their family. 

ALBERT BROOKSTEIN
You're nothing more that uncivilised animals. What'd ya want with an old man like me? Because I'd rather die than give in, if thats what it'll take. 

Martin Corone the man in the suit rolls his sleeves up and takes his blazer and tie off. He rips the blindfold off of Albert.


MARTIN CORONE
Money doesn't always pay Albert, you think you can just

ALBERT
I CAN DO WHAT I WANT, THATS WHAT.

MARTIN
Ugh and I thought you'd be polite. Life, it's such a pretty thing isn't it? Old men like you should be hung. But now why would I want to do that when we know how to really kill you. Right to the core. 

ALBERT
You couldn't burn a mayfly. Sorry, once you've come out the cot then I will raise my hands and give in. 

RODGER CORONE
You think you're f**king funny don't ya? Well here I thought Martin was funny, just turns out it was his suit.

MARTIN
Oi

RODGER
I didn't ask you to speak did I Martin?

Rodger spits on Albert then right hook punches him in the face, blood flies out Albert's mouth. This is then followed by Martin who at first looks scared, but he continues to punch Albert in the stomach and then kicks the chair backwards. Rodger goes all up in his face.

RODGER
Just give us the location of your earnings and we'll let you be on your way. Il be honest I want you dead, but what's the good of that? When I can enjoy seeing you suffer the loss of what you love. 

MARTIN
ANSWER HIM

RODGER
Once, my brother. Short little kid, thought he was hilarious. Well, to everyone but himself. Made a fool outta the whole family. We tried…we really did, after all he was our bro. And family always stick together. But he shamed us all, thinking he could grow up and become some pretentious prick who orders the entirety of the world around. 

MARTIN
He got it.

RODGER
Now he never had the chance to learn, because he had to be eradicated before it was too late. You on the other hand have a choice. Lifes cached up with you old Albert boy. 

JOHNNY CORONE
Mercy ain't the boss of us. We pride ourselves on the respect of the Corone's. Five generations of respectable rogues. And what are you? Ha, you're just a pathetic Black Tie Gang wannabe. Mocking us was never wise.  

ALBERT
You think some so called clever little anecdotes will change my mind? Pfft you really don't know me at all. Just kill me, be cleaner that way. 

MARTIN
Bore me later with your dusty old stories, wheres our money?

ALBERT
Why would I ever hand back my riches? It's fair game, you didn't have to play the fool. Play properly next time. Death is a way I'd much prefer. Because i'm the con, you are the subjects. 

RODGER
He's had his chances. Bring her in.

George Corone drives into the hangar with a black van, Johnny and Martin open the back doors and drag a weak body next to Albert. She squeals and cries. Her hands are tied up and she is blindfolded. Blood drips from her arm. It is Albert's wife Mary.

MARY BROOKSTEIN
Im dead already Albert (sobs) what's the point anyway?

Albert starts to cry at the realisation that it is his wife, he begs for them to let her go. 

ALBERT
Mary, MARY. I love you. It's going to be okay, trust me alright? Let her go………please. I'm begging you.

MARTIN
We have you where it hurts, how's it feel Albert? Here her squeals at the consequence of your actions. 

RODGER
You know the deal, our money. Everything you have, tell us where it is and we'll let you live.

ALBERT
Bu…

MARTIN
If you value your wife's life then you'll tell us.

MARY
Albert, Albert it's ok. I loved you, but I do not anymore. My life is nothing without you. But money is nothing without yours. Just let me die. I'm old anyway, I've been dead inside for years. I thought you escaped this world, but obviously you didn't. 

ALBERT
You can't kill…her..bu (sobs, can't finish his words)

RODGER
Give us ya maneyy.

Albert
(long pause) 34 Acres Avenue, behind the lamppost there is a some concrete, underneath there, are four briefcases. My money. 

JOHNNY
Now if we find out that you're lying, then there will be much worse to come. 

RODGER
Let her go, she's no good to us now.

Albert is left tied up, he is distraught. Mary, at a struggle gets up and starts limping out. Martin pours petrol around the perimeter, as Mary is walking out Johnny shoots her three times. She collapses dead.

Albert starts screaming and crying.
ALBERT
MARYYYYYYYYYY (sobs)

MARTIN
All hail Corone.

RODGER
Shouldn't make us wait Al, let it burn. 

Rodger squeezes Albert's cheek in sarcasm and then drops a match and sets alight the petrol in the hangar.

Dialogue script - third draft

JORDAN SMITH
The years haven't been pretty to Albert.

 AIDEN TOOLE
 Look…you’re not supposed to know about him.


JORDAN
Your uncle lived a lie. Never happy enough with what he's got. 

AIDEN
He's got pound signs for eyes, he was ravelled in mystery ever since I was born. Mum and dad refused to tell me that my un-philanthropic uncle robbed from the wealth of others.

JORDAN
Guess that seems fair though, you'd be too young to understand. Friends of my brothers, well people he knows. They know of Albert, better get his back covered. That's all I'm saying.

AIDEN
Sorry?

JORDAN
The Corones, a highly invested family. They have an expansively wealthy empire. Albert's a crook after all, and what do crooks do? They take from the big'uns, I heard that's exactly what he did to them. Lets just say they ain't the forgiving type.

AIDEN

Just stay out of their business, you’re no one to get involved. Talking stuff like that is never good. Families family, so they'll have me to answer to if so.

JORDAN

Alright, alright. But I just thought ya better know. In case, you know? It’d be heart breaking for your family if you lost him.


AIDEN
My uncle isn't exactly the family man. It's not like we meet up every week, I rarely see him. Now shut up about this. You're meant to keep quiet. If this gets out I know where to come.

JORDAN
Fine, cya later…mate. 

Dialogue script - Re-write

JORDAN SMITH
The years haven't been pretty to Albert

 AIDEN TOOLE
Why bring him up? Not your business to go messing with

JORDAN
He lived a lie that man, from what I know. Not happy enough with what he's got. Never enough ay.

AIDEN
He's got pound signs for eyes, he was ravelled in mystery ever since I was born. Mum and dad refused to tell me that my un-philanthropic uncle robbed from the wealth of others.

JORDAN
Guess that seems fair though, you'd be too young to understand. Friends of my brothers, well people he knows. They know of Albert, better get his back covered. That's all I'm saying.

AIDEN
Sorry?

JORDAN
The Corones, a highly invested family. They have an expansively wealthy empire. Albert's a crook after all, and what do crooks do? They thieve, I heard that's exactly what he did. Lets just say they ain't the forgiving type.

AIDEN
Why do you always get so involved? Stay out of peoples problems. Chatting rubbish was always your game. Families family, so you'll have me to answer to.

JORDAN
I'm sorry, just thought I'd make you aware of the repercussions that he might foresee. I'd hate to see you upset if he got in trouble.

AIDEN
My uncle isn't exactly the family man. It's not like we meet up every week, I rarely see him. Now shut up about this. You're meant to keep quiet. If this gets out I know where to come.

JORDAN
Fine, cya later…mate. 

Learning to write for particular characters

Stacey - 17, sarcastic


You're such a dick, no one likes you. Get out!

Uh, I just…just. I can't seem to say the words but I…I love you.

I need to get a life, this film is so shockingly boring it's funny.

Gladys - 52, bored, educated

I think it's time you leave now Mandy, when you learn to control your temper you can speak to me again. 

We've been through a lot, but il always love you Derek.

Can we switch DVDs, this isn't to my taste. 

Barney - 5, cheerful, confused

Lawrence has gone mummy, who took it?

Yummyyyyy, I love this din dins.

Pleaseee, but I don't get it. Tell meeee.  

Jack - Hard boiled cop

You better not be lying to me boy, il skin ya if I find out you a thief.

Hm, this dinner is better than usual. What cook you been dating ay Casey?

If I don't get the answers to all this mess then I won't be too pleased. Do you understand my orders?