Tuesday 13 May 2014

TFOM - Tweaked script for technicality reasons

EXT. Streets, hill, park, back garden – Night

The shot opens up with a boy named LUKE PHILLIPS, 17, medium height. Running frantically along a street, you can hear lots of cars rushing about. He constantly looks behind, obviously scared at the sight of someone after him. He eventually finds a house to hide in; he opens the gate and sneaks in the garden. He is then startled at the sight of a person with a pistol.

 LUKE PHILLIPS

Please. Look, I mean no harm. I’m fine I promise.

All that can be seen between LUKE talking, is a pistol (close-up shot), which then cuts back to Luke.

LUKE

This country is dying; don’t make me another number on the list of the dead.

LUKE is quite clearly panicking, he doesn’t want to die. Cuts to the pistol.
LUKE

I promise it’s a mistake. They didn’t mean to mark me, I swear.

Cuts back to a shot of the pistol.

LUKE

Hurt me and you’ll have a bigger guilty conscience on you, and that’s something no one wants in this world.

LUKE

Look I beg you now, Il do anything. Please...please don’t hurt me. It’s a dreadful mistake, what about if I –

Two gun shots are fired, cut to the title sequence.

CUT TO:

EXT. Field – Day

Various shots of the character LUCY PEACH dancing and looking happy in a field are shown. It looks quite blurry and dream like.

 

CUT TO:

INT. House – Day

A new location is established, the scene starts off with a point of view shot looking up at the character of LIAM WESTWOOD. The shot is a bit shaky and blurry. This shows the character of GEORGE LEWIS waking up.

 

LIAM WESTWOOD

George. George. Wake up George.

Point of view shot still looking up, creates enigma codes as to who is looking up.

GEORGE LEWIS

(MURMURING)

LIAM

George you need to get up, we have a problem.

The point of view camera shot looking up at Liam starts to move up, shows George is trying to get up.

LIAM

Stop, I’ll give you a hand.

LIAM reaches down and pulls GEORGE up, he then gives him a glass of water. GEORGE and LIAM then walk over to the window.

LIAM

There’s a boy in the garden, he must be one of the marked ones. We need to –

GEORGE

Oh my god, Lucy. Where is she? I have to find –

As LIAM is speaking, GEORGE picks up his phone and dials LUCY. There is no service.

LIAM

NO. You aren’t going anywhere George, it’s not safe outside. We have to barricade the house, that boy is going to wake up.

We need to find a way to make ourselves safe.

GEORGE

Then why don’t we just leave?

LIAM

We can’t, don’t you remember what they said?

It’s not safe

(PAUSE)

GEORGE

Then we kill him?

LIAM

What’s the good of that, he’ll still awaken after his rapid state kicks in.

GEORGE

We don’t know that though, for all we know this could be some major hoax

LIAM

Are you thick? This is no joke –

GEORGE

Who says so? They could’ve been lying for all you know

LIAM

Have you heard the screams at night? The constant knocking, the sound of slaughter

GEORGE

But…but, but

George collapses on the floor, the scene then cuts to a flashback.

CUT TO:

EXT. Woods – Day

A new setting is established, this is a flashback from when LIAM went out on a walk and encountered four military personnel when the apocalypse started. It is a sunny day, everything seems happy.

Liam is shown walking on a path, talking to George on the phone.

LIAM

Yes, yes I’ve already said it’s ok

Different close-up and medium shots of Liam on the phone.

Haha look don’t worry about it, cleared it with my parents

Besides our mums have gone off to some hippie weekender and dads on a judgement day calling festival with the church

So yes you can stay, just don’t paint the house red like you did last time I gave you a pot of paint to play with

Machine gun fire can be heard, LIAM is startled. He runs to take cover, afraid of who is shooting. He puts the phone away.

Four military personnel, dressed in full green combat gear are running in sync as a squad. They are coming out of the woods; two of them have machine gun weapons. The soldiers refer to themselves by their surnames only.

BLACKBURN T

OI you, what are you doing outside?

WILBO T

Cut him some slack, I doubt he knows what’s going on

LIAM

What’s happening? Is this an exercise or something?

 

WILBO T

You need to leave

LIAM

Why?

BLACKBURN T

There’s been a breakout, a high security holding facility in the south of York –

BLACKBURN A

A virus, originally caught off of rapid dogs. It quickly spread to humans.

WILBO T

People went crazy, started attacking and tearing apart innocent people.

BLACKBURN T

Those with the infection were rounded up in a facility, where they couldn’t escape. Except –

BLACKBURN A

Someone hatched a plan to let them out –

WILBO T

That’s why it is of the upmost importance you stay inside. This nation isn’t safe, there are infected people out there, infected that want your flesh

LIAM

Why should I believe you?

WILBO T

 Don’t believe us then, but when you see one you’ll soon change your mind.

BLACKBURN T

Those with the infection have been marked with a black symbol on their right hand.

LIAM

There’s no need for me to get involved though

BLACKBURN A

Yes there is. It’s time to take up arms. The fall of man is now; you must fight to stay alive.

LIAM

But surely you lot and the government will sort this out?

BLACKBURN T

It’s too late for that, the government have known about this breakout for years. It’s all been planned.

LIAM

I have no experience in guns, what use am I?

BLACKBURN A

Then you hide, barricade yourself in.

WILBO T

There will come a time though, when you can no longer hide

LIAM

So what use is hiding if I have no weapons?

BLACKBURN T

Here take this, you put it on and you run. Get inside, don’t speak to anyone

LIAM

But –

BLACKBURN A

No more buts, when the time comes you do what ya gotta do

BLACKBURN A passes something to LIAM, LIAM hurriedly start walking off in the distance. The scene cuts back to present day.

CUT TO:

INT. House – Day

LIAM is sitting talking to a now woken up GEORGE.

LIAM

How do you feel?

GEORGE

Better

LIAM

You don’t look great

GEORGE

Neither do you but I don’t complain

GEORGE’S temper is getting worse, more signs he has the infection are growing.

LIAM

Have something to eat, just to be on the safe side.

GEORGE

Have you got any meat?

LIAM

No

GEORGE

Then I’m not hungry, are you going to let me leave?

LIAM

You can’t –

GEORGE

Yeah, but who’s going to stop me? You? I don’t think so

LIAM

You aren’t well enough to leave, you aren’t thinking straight.

GEORGE

I can do what I want

LIAM

Lucy’s gone, she’s probably dead and buried for all you know

GEORGE

How dare you say that, that’s my girlfriend

LIAM

Not any more she isn’t, you haven’t heard from her, for all you know she’s been marked –

GEORGE stands up and gets all up in LIAM’S face, LIAM stands up as well. They both look very on edge with each other.

GEORGE

NO SHE HASN’T

LIAM grabs GEORGE and gives him some angry advice.  

LIAM

Shut up and listen to me, you want to survive? Do ya? Do ya? Because you know what’s become of this country, five days have passed and nearly half the population are dead. Soon that could be you.

GEORGE collapses again on the floor, it is quite clear that his condition is worsening. LIAM goes to pick up the pistol, his hands are trembling. The scene cuts to another flashback.

CUT TO:

EXT. Streets, hill, park, back garden – Night

The flashback is an extended version of the opening sequence; it shows who shot the marked boy LUKE PHILLIPS. It is LIAM who killed him; this scene is an exchange of sentences between the two and then LUKE’S death.

LUKE PHILLIPS

Please. Look, I mean no harm. I’m fine I promise.

LIAM

It’s got to be done

LUKE

This country is dying; don’t make me another number on the list of the dead.

LIAM

Don’t you think I know that?

LUKE

I promise it’s a mistake. They didn’t mean to mark me, I swear.

LIAM

I’m sorry but I value my life, it’s time to take up arms. And that’s exactly what I’m doing.

LUKE

Hurt me and you’ll have a bigger guilty conscience on you, and that’s something no one wants in this world.

LIAM

It’s too late

LUKE

Look I beg you now, Il do anything. Please...please don’t hurt me. It’s a dreadful mistake, what about if I –

LIAM

Sorry

Two shots are fired, LUKE is dead. There are then various fade in fade out transitions which show LIAM dragging LUKE’S body onto the grass and then rapping a sheet around him.

CUT TO:

INT. House – Day

The scene cuts back to GEORGE lying on the floor unconscious. LIAM tries to wake him up.

LIAM

GEORGE, c’mon George

Close-up shot

LIAM

Don’t die on me

GEORGE starts to go into a fit, his whole body shakes like crazy, and black liquid starts to spew out of his mouth. Various quick cuts are shown of LIAM panicking and trying to find something to help GEORGE.

LIAM remembers something BLACKBURN A said, the line is shown again showing LIAM is remembering.

BLACKBURN A

It’s time to take up arms. The fall of man is now; you must fight to stay alive.

LIAM looks at the pistol he is holding in his hands again.

There are a few different shots of LIAM looking at GEORGE on the floor, when there is a thumping sound. He turns around; LUKE is at the door, this time in a fully rapid state. He leaves a blood hand print on the door. His face in covered in blood and black liquid, he has a very sinister looking face.

 

LIAM

It’s time

There is a titled angle; LIAM looks down at his pistol. He then looks back up, close-up shot.

LIAM

I’m sorry

Another close-up shot of LIAM is shown, two gun shots are heard. Fade to black. End credits are shown.

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